tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post456135130563328655..comments2023-12-30T07:32:20.324+05:30Comments on Confessions Of The Chocolate Obsessed™: Silent Night - IICookieCrumbsInc.http://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-48587498265596293542014-01-09T12:13:54.396+05:302014-01-09T12:13:54.396+05:30Like everyone has already told you, the plot is am...Like everyone has already told you, the plot is amazing. I did not expect that THIS would be the reason he walked out! It is amazing how you've surprised the readers and that's a really good thing. An expected twist and a predictable story wouldn't make for such a good read. I can't wait to see how she handles this.<br /><br />Although, he still is a jerk for waiting till the last moment to tell this to her. He could have called the wedding off a week or even a day ago and told her his reasons. Maybe he doesn't love her enough or he had this last minute realisation that she doesn't "Love" him. Men!! :PNikitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07750193581904352921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-33087126958203347302014-01-09T12:12:18.398+05:302014-01-09T12:12:18.398+05:30Like everyone has already told you, the plot is am...Like everyone has already told you, the plot is amazing. I did not expect that THIS would be the reason he walked out! It is amazing how you've surprised the readers and that's a really good thing. An expected twist and a predictable story wouldn't make for such a good read.<br /><br />However, a few things I would like to suggest and I hope that you will take them well.<br />1. When she returns to the apartment, you've described how she gets rid of every piece of garment. Maybe you could add how she rubs cleanser on her face to get rid of the mascara streaks that made her face look grief-stricken, how she splashes water on her face to get rid of every last reminder of the tears and the cheap makeup. <br />2. Also, since this happens on her wedding day, after she is dressed, wouldn't the guests already be at the venue. I found it odd that she had to call every one of them to let them know that the wedding wasn't happening. Same goes for travel bookings for the guests. Since they would already be there, they would need their travel bookings to go back home..<br /><br />Maybe you could modify these.. And feel free to not accept this comment. Let this be for your eyes only. I'll post another one with just the good part!! :P :)Nikitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07750193581904352921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-39068744940437260912014-01-08T11:15:45.085+05:302014-01-08T11:15:45.085+05:30BIG hugs for reading it three times!!! :*BIG hugs for reading it three times!!! :*CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-50705949483220046732014-01-08T11:15:14.656+05:302014-01-08T11:15:14.656+05:30:):)CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-20753782757338036812014-01-08T11:14:21.173+05:302014-01-08T11:14:21.173+05:30This IS the second part of a four part series :)
...This IS the second part of a four part series :)<br /><br />Thaanks for dropping by!CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-49264337913064708102014-01-01T02:34:13.903+05:302014-01-01T02:34:13.903+05:30I think my comment just vanished. :/
In brief, I c...I think my comment just vanished. :/<br />In brief, I commented that please let there be a happy ending and I'm a total sucker for your fictional posts. You're back and how. I louve the way you give your characters space to grow and don't try to finish it off as a task. There's a certain depth and I can almost feel what the character feels. You are a master. Post the next part jaldi jaldi. :DKhushboo Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13427595444661048274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-81988832392335908092014-01-01T02:29:30.266+05:302014-01-01T02:29:30.266+05:30Please let there be a happy ending! Please, please...Please let there be a happy ending! Please, please, pretty please. <br />Reading both the parts for the 3rd time. Still can't get over how beautifully you've described the emotions, the depth you've given, its almost as you make your readers feel all of that. Waiting for the next installment. :DKhushboo Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13427595444661048274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-67159419704129711972013-12-31T22:13:29.395+05:302013-12-31T22:13:29.395+05:30Unexpected..Its nice,not a typical love story
I k...Unexpected..Its nice,not a typical love story<br /><br />I kinda like Justin's character..<br /><br />Looking forward for more :)the other side of mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12935751227117771173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-65261294902180144982013-12-30T17:11:15.588+05:302013-12-30T17:11:15.588+05:30That's a lot of drama. Good drama I mean :)
D...That's a lot of drama. Good drama I mean :)<br /><br />Do you also write them in parts? Or do you just like to tease audience?<br /><br />P.S: Love your blog's masthead!Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01104193753884264542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-76681136632785759742013-12-30T15:13:15.325+05:302013-12-30T15:13:15.325+05:30:D very soon..:D very soon..CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-71743818452232081072013-12-30T15:12:58.403+05:302013-12-30T15:12:58.403+05:30Em, Em, Em, not all stories have happy endings no?...Em, Em, Em, not all stories have happy endings no? :PCookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-51576030438494616832013-12-30T15:12:29.140+05:302013-12-30T15:12:29.140+05:30I suspected you would :)
And what are you jealou...I suspected you would :) <br /><br />And what are you jealous of? You make us literally roll on the floor laughing :)CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-42013502851631453212013-12-30T15:11:35.746+05:302013-12-30T15:11:35.746+05:30He does, doesn't he?He does, doesn't he?CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-9771938293736883512013-12-30T15:11:07.924+05:302013-12-30T15:11:07.924+05:30:) thaanks!:) thaanks!CookieCrumbsInc.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06913746088715446566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-81491878649648298702013-12-30T12:00:37.239+05:302013-12-30T12:00:37.239+05:30Oh wow, oh wow!
Next part soon. Soon soon soon.Oh wow, oh wow!<br /><br />Next part soon. Soon soon soon.Soumyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07439590494620390907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-46012456703514792062013-12-30T11:57:10.896+05:302013-12-30T11:57:10.896+05:30OMG This letter was a masterpiece! I really hope t...OMG This letter was a masterpiece! I really hope there is a happy story in the waiting :Pmaithilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13026338900563080890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-61685853875718817992013-12-30T09:23:54.822+05:302013-12-30T09:23:54.822+05:30Your narration and the way of making the reader ho...Your narration and the way of making the reader hold on to every written word. <br />I AM JEALOUS!! <br />Waiting for the next part.<br />I btw I connect with the girl.Red Handedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17062645716811851771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-626316469907265072013-12-30T00:46:19.721+05:302013-12-30T00:46:19.721+05:30You know my darkest secret, you know my deepest fe...You know my darkest secret, you know my deepest fear and I don’t even know whether you prefer Coke to Pepsi. I expected that with time, you’d thaw, with time, we’d grow closer and with time, you’d let me know the scared child who went through hell, a price she paid for being the strong, successful woman she is today. <br /><br />These lines would be rememebered forever by me !! He loves madly....The Enchantresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14224978469040589576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4266767622811094764.post-56933096216656934732013-12-29T22:03:03.394+05:302013-12-29T22:03:03.394+05:30OMG! OMG! OMG! Love the way this is going.. Never ...OMG! OMG! OMG! Love the way this is going.. Never imagined such a topsy-turvy plot :) Awesome writing man!Keirthanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17556425369242798255noreply@blogger.com