Loud hippie colors
The crash of the waves
The grainy sand
A gypsy headband
The light diffusing
above her head
Wavy tresses
kissing slender waist
Hard planes of chiseled jaws
Early morning scruff
above her head
Wavy tresses
kissing slender waist
Hard planes of chiseled jaws
Early morning scruff
Sexy piercings and deeply inked skin
Knotted fingers and juicy kisses
Tanned skin against beaded bracelets
Drunk on the bliss of freedom
Satiated sighs
Sharp intakes of breath
Munching on berries and bread
Coming alive to the weed by the bed
Sweet summer love
Fleeting moments
Quick to dissipate
There is finality in the goodbye
An understood period
But also the promise
Of never to forget.
wow.. i could almost feel the sand and smell the weed in the air..
ReplyDeleteLook who is back! :)
Deletei was never gone..
DeleteThanks for that, then :)
DeleteAnd it was only yesterday when Delhi summer broke its previous record by reaching a mercurial high of 47.8 while the lady on the radio extolled the virtues of having summer. Like mangoes, and all. Now you show me that grass is greener on the other side. Darn! I'm going back to the hills! :D
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
If you gotta live with the heat, it helps to fantasize about it :D
DeleteWOW!!! I could see her in my head. Inked and pierced. Beautiful and mysterious.. Loved it PeeVee :)
ReplyDeleteThaaaank you :)
DeleteThere is finality in the goodbye
ReplyDeleteAn understood period
Reading this gave me a high!
Goodness gracious, girl .
Reading your comments is always a pick-me-up :)
Deletelovely ..I can almost imagine the sun and the sand..
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteBeautiful poem PeeVee......very sensual..
ReplyDeleteThanks Chech :)
Deletecool poem and even superb picture....it is so hot here that i am literally craving for being near to a water body!
ReplyDeleteThink about taking a flying leap in a cool, rippling lake. Or listen to the rain on soundrown :) Helped me :D
DeleteWe all want that summer love <3 nice post
ReplyDeleteWe really do :)
DeleteI loved how you weaved different stories of summer together. Some interesting phrases too. Well written
ReplyDeleteThank you! Which ones, if I may ask? :)
DeleteAh summers and the stories they create! Nostalgia :)
ReplyDeleteIndeed! :)
Deletehey Pee vee.. that is a lovely poem..
ReplyDeleteyes never to forget .....
Bikram
Never ever ever!
DeleteLoved the last four lines... so meaningful and true.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletei feel like jumping into this water..for it is so hot here :P
ReplyDeleteNice poem :)
I feel you, bro. I really do.
DeleteThanks :)
Hmmm...summers and romance...inseparable and filled with lovely memories...well written, PeeVee!
ReplyDeleteAren't they? Sigh :)
Deleteevery summer has such a story *wicked chuckle while i type this *
ReplyDeleteTeehee, I know what you mean ;P
DeleteSweet summer love! I love love love this. It's been a while that I connected to a poem to this extend. :D
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks love :)
DeleteCan't even begin to tell you how beautiful this one is... you do write like a dream.. go girl !
ReplyDeleteThank you SO much, S :)
Delete"There is finality in the goodbye
ReplyDeleteAn understood period
But also the promise
Of never to forget." And I clap to these wonderful lines :-)
Coming from you, poetry maestro, means a lot :) Thank you :)
DeleteAnd summers are as warm as that poem ! Good one !
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anita! :)
Deletehave you been traveling to europe and such?
ReplyDeleteSigh, I wish. But no. Why do you ask?
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